I tried to write a fanfic in English...

toad_princess · Vorschüler Alter: 18 Anmeldungsdatum: 08.08.2007 Beiträge: 16

Hello everyone, I'm new here..
I'm German, but you have to write in English in this thread, right?
Okay..I just wrote a very short, very bad English fanfiction and I would like someone to read and correct it...is anyone here who's very good at English and who could take the time to read it?
Because as the content's already so bad, I want at least the language to be okay.
By the way, it's "after-deathly-hallows"-content...
bye for now,
the toad princess....

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 09.08.2007, 11:07 Titel:

Hey..! You can send it to me I'll look over it. I am not very good in English, but I can try!

toad_princess · Verfasst am: 09.08.2007, 12:19 Titel:

that's very nice, but I have to warn you: it's really bad.
And basically it's only a letter...
Aaand it's the first fanfiction I ever did.
I don't know how I hit upon the idea of writing it in English...it just happened..! Confused

toad_princess · Verfasst am: 16.08.2007, 13:29 Titel:

uh~oh...I just read some fanfictions...some here and some at fanfiction.com and I realized mine is just very very bad compared to them... Sad

Well, I better won't continue writing it...Would not make very much sense. Maybe I'll try again ... later.
Rolling Eyes

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 16.08.2007, 17:06 Titel:

It's your decision but you can send it to me anyway Wink

(I am away till Sunday)

lg

MiCH · Verfasst am: 18.08.2007, 23:09 Titel:

@ Siri: You´re good in english, much better than i!

@ toad_princess: Don´t give up!!! You´ll only get better if you still try!

omg, i hate to write in english!!! It´s really difficult...

lg

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 19.08.2007, 19:14 Titel: