My first english Fan Fictions

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 11.03.2006, 11:34 Titel: My first english Fan Fictions

This is not a new story, it is very similar with "Ich liebte ihn", but there is one other person in it. Maybe it is better! And there is no slash!

I will always love him

He was my enemy. I loved him. His laugh, his lovingly words, his kisses. I’ve loved everything at him. He had to die, because I loved him. Because he loved me.
All the time. All the time we spent together. Nobody could have known. Nobody. But him. His Murderer.
I have only one question all the time. Why? Why did he have to die? There is only one answer I can give to myself. Because I’ve loved him. Because I’ll always love him. But that’s not fair! Love isn’t bad, I think. But it was forbidden.
I had known, that it was forbidden. Always. But I didn’t understand. He didn’t, too.
We tried everything to keep secret. But he is dead. I knew, I was guilty.
But I can’t understand, why he had killed him. He could have talked with us. But instead of that he had killed him. His own son.

Hermione put her hand on Draco’s cold face. With soft movements she wandered through his hair. She ignored the wounds and the horror on his narrow face.

They had met at the lake, like they had always done. They were deepened in a kiss, when they heard something rustle.
She let off him, and hid under the Invisibility Cloak, which she had lent from Harry.
Meanwhile Draco had taken his book, and did like he was reading.
“Chrm, chrm.”
“What are you doing here, father?”, he asked surprised.
“Aren’t you glad to see me?”, he replied with a trace of strictness.
“Yes, but I wonder…”
“Are you her alone?”, Lucius asked.
Hermiones stomach turned around.
“Of course, father.”
“Don’t lie at me!”, he shouted angrily at his son.
Suddenly he took out his wand an put it against Draco.
“Come out, Granger! You have to see this!”
“No!”, shouted Draco. “Hide! He will kill you!”
“Shut up!”
He hit his son, but that was too much for Hermione, so she put away the Cloak and wanted to throw her at Lucius, but he put up his wand and whispered: “Stupor.”.

After a while he took off the curse, and she looked around and felt, that she was bound.
She looked to her boyfriend and felt very angry; His father must have hit and tortured him. His clothes were torn, and there was blood all over his body. There were shadows under his eyes and he was sweating. He was also bound.
She hated Lucius. She hated him from the bottom of her heart. Now he was looking at his son. Draco was lying on the ground and did hardly move. The only movement was a weak up and down of his chest.
Putting his wand against Draco, Lucius said: “I’ll kill you know.”
Horror was on Draco’s face.
“Avada Kedavra.”
Lucius Malfoy took the bounds of her and disappeared. She fell to her knees next to Draco and couldn’t believe that he was dead.

Draco’s dead body had lain in Hermione’s arms for hours, but she didn’t mind. She had put her cape over his body, ‘cause she didn’t want to see the blood.
His face was pale, but she loved it, like she had done for months.
Her mind got clearer slowly, and she noticed that it was night.
She didn’t feel the cold, only pain and hate.
Hermione knew, she couldn’t live without Draco. She gave him a last kiss, and once again she thought to feel the love between them.
Then she put him carefully onto the ground and put her cape over his head. Then she put her wand against her head.
I will always love you. That last time she thought this.
“Avada Kedavra.”
Two easy and just the same deadly words were to hear. Then there was silence again.

Sany · Verfasst am: 11.03.2006, 20:46 Titel:

Wow, big respect for writing a fanfiction in english!!
i like the story but it is very similair with "Ich liebte ihn"^^
But that is not a problem for me^^

HP-fan · Verfasst am: 15.03.2006, 20:00 Titel:

Yeah, a very good story and a big respect to write it in English.

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 20.03.2006, 14:26 Titel:

Thanks a lot!!
I know it's very similar, but I only translated it and changed the people Embarassed

But I will write another fan fiction if I have time...

Sirius

Litschi · Verfasst am: 31.07.2006, 11:07 Titel:

Hi

Its great that you translatet that in to english!!!!

I´m flying today to Ireland,(halv of my family life there...)

and its very good to come a little bit into the english language!!!

lg,Ltschi

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 31.07.2006, 11:11 Titel:

Thank you.

I'll write another english FF in the next time, then you can read other english things Wink

In our English Board you'll find a lot stuff to read Wink

lg

Rabastan Lestrange · Verfasst am: 22.02.2007, 13:46 Titel:

I think, this fanfiction is really good. I can't write it in english, because I think, this language isn't easy Wink

Sirius Black · Verfasst am: 22.02.2007, 14:08 Titel:

Thx

erinnere-mich · Viertklässler Anmeldungsdatum: 28.07.2007 Beiträge: 193

Very great.
It sounds like the story of Romeo and Juliet Wink

ich eben^^ · Verfasst am: 12.04.2008, 17:56 Titel:

well...that story is fuckin' good
respect... Very Happy